This kept me intrigued! I knew a twist was coming but it was no way the kind of twist you laid out to the audience. I read it in once sitting. I liked how you didn't mince any words on what was to take place. How you described the the other daughter in disgust and disdain made me have a clear mental picture of what Edward was looking at. I would have high tailed it out of the room. lol. Thank you for sending this. I personally look forward to the next one.
Jesus, how did you know about my wedding?
Happily ever after? Actually, you inspired me to go a bit darker this time round. Thanks.
It is indeed a strange story, even scarier than the aunt who recently visited..... Is there a sequel to either
Interesting point, I'd not thought of that. perhaps something in the way of backstory. Thanks for the new idea!
My pleasure, old pal !
That's a great little story, that is. It's got a great Hammer vibe to it.
And I am dead sure there really are ancient families just like that.
Well that escalated quickly. Came here via the Prompt Quest!
The Prompt Quest is a great idea.
I hope Winston or Brian continues it!
This kept me intrigued! I knew a twist was coming but it was no way the kind of twist you laid out to the audience. I read it in once sitting. I liked how you didn't mince any words on what was to take place. How you described the the other daughter in disgust and disdain made me have a clear mental picture of what Edward was looking at. I would have high tailed it out of the room. lol. Thank you for sending this. I personally look forward to the next one.
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate your support.
No worries at all. I really enjoyed it. So thank you!
Douglas, you should published your stories, this is amazing!
Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment, it means a lot.
Thanks Evelyn. The Hammer comparison is high praise. No doubt there are ancient families whose veneer of modernity hides some fearful secrets.
Thank you very much. I'm appreciative of your comments and support and glad that you liked the story.